OK, in prep for possibly submitting it to Slamdance, I've updated Randolph Carter:
hypergrafia.com/carter/
I've made the edits which Clamatius found (and major thanks goes to him what's hopefully the last of my errors). I've also updated the design a bit to match some suggestions Jason had made and corrected a couple of code bugs.
tagged: interactive fiction, lovecraft
Thursday, September 07, 2006
Randolph Carter Updated
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seem to largely aquatic > seem to be largely aquatic
uncoils it's way -> uncoils its way
You feint and -> You faint and
Ecaped -> Escaped
Lost are we -> Lost, are we
sepulcherin -> sepulcher
in it's carrying box -> in its carrying box
sepulcherin? That's just wrong.
OK, updated again. I gave it a go with AppleWork's spell check this time, but I may still have some grammar and possessive mistakes, obviously.
You got credit in the info popup on the draft with that post btw :)
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