Thursday, September 07, 2006

Randolph Carter Updated

OK, in prep for possibly submitting it to Slamdance, I've updated Randolph Carter:

hypergrafia.com/carter/

I've made the edits which Clamatius found (and major thanks goes to him what's hopefully the last of my errors). I've also updated the design a bit to match some suggestions Jason had made and corrected a couple of code bugs.



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3 comments:

  1. Clamatius3:30 PM

    seem to largely aquatic > seem to be largely aquatic

    uncoils it's way -> uncoils its way

    You feint and -> You faint and

    Ecaped -> Escaped

    Lost are we -> Lost, are we

    sepulcherin -> sepulcher

    in it's carrying box -> in its carrying box

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  2. Josh4:11 PM

    sepulcherin? That's just wrong.

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  3. Josh5:29 PM

    OK, updated again. I gave it a go with AppleWork's spell check this time, but I may still have some grammar and possessive mistakes, obviously.

    You got credit in the info popup on the draft with that post btw :)

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