I think I will try and polish Randolph Carter and submit it to Slamdance. To be honest, I'm not entirely thrilled with the outcome - although it accomplishes some groundwork that could prove vital. I've got two other textual projects I'm at least contemplating at this point. Both would actually move away from Carter's "highlighted text" design and go into something more card-like in an interface, although there might be more similarity than that sounds.
So if anyone wants to try it out again and offer more feedback, it's at:
http://hypergrafia.com/carter/
There will probably be a redesign from the drab HTML, updated docs and possibly a couple story tweaks at the very least.
tagged: interactive fiction, lovecraft
It's me again.
ReplyDeleteoutline of a few object -> outline of a few objects
esophogus -> esophagus
You complete me.
ReplyDeleteThis time I cut to the chase and looked at your source code & text resources.
ReplyDeleteIf you're using American spellings, it's usually "gray" not "grey".
privvy -> privy
feint -> faint
non-chalantly -> nonchalantly
seperated -> separated
It's tone and -> Its tone and
bural -> burial
sepuchler -> sepulcher
in form or another -> in one form or another
does still breath -> does still breathe
reciever -> receiver
tumbles it's way -> tumbles its way
stop it's descent -> stop its descent
it's illumination -> its illumination
eyes to growing -> eyes to the growing
to insure that -> to ensure that
trussles -> trusses
in it's own -> in its own
share it's beliefs -> share its beliefs
off of the alter -> off the altar
you breath the -> you breathe the
You're seriously too good to me. I'll try and find some time to get this updated this weekend, possibly along with a visual redesign.
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